...I think the thing that's bothering me most about the illustrated entry is actually that their artistic technique is very good, actually. There's a definite sense of progression, given that it goes from a nice simplistic style to a meticulously detailed horror. There's a lot of talent in that area of things...

...and then the actual story is written as though the author thought e.e. cummings gave them license to do whatever they wanted, punctuation, capitalization and proper spelling be damned.